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©2008-2009 ~chococo
:iconchococo:

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since i received very nice comments on my other sketch,
i decided to post another. :heart:
please tell me what you think :D

and as i said in my other sketch,
i'm not a pencil artist, so please be kind with the critiquing >.<

夏=natsu=summer :heart:

quick sketch: 10-15min
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Please do not use or take without my permission.
thank you

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:iconundergroundracer57:
The only thing I can really say about this is that the top of her head seems to be too high. But otherwise it looks good. =]

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「一緒にいこう。」

「10代目!」
:iconsandergfx:
pretty good, keep it up!! :]
:iconchococo:
thanks!! and for the :+fav: too :heart:
:iconchococo:
thanks!! ohh so thats what it was...hm
:iconchapra:
wow your facial expressions are good=)

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Richard



fuck them I'm a soldier of the apocalypse i don't give a fuck
:iconchococo:
aw thanks richard :hug:
:iconchapra:
:love:

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Richard



fuck them I'm a soldier of the apocalypse i don't give a fuck
:iconraindropmemory:
1.What's that dirty thing on the paper?:omg: Clean every dirty thing before post!! even it just a sketch! :pissed::D

2.You should practice to draw in 'one' line, yeah, like you necklace.
Right now there are too many line (for example at her arms)

3.Oh, and Undergroundracer57 is right, your head is a bit too high. So, every time you draw the portrait, just check every time that the proportion is correct or not. :)

4.Eyes, see my mini tutorial :) ------> [link]

5. and...the hair looks fuzzy, you can't just wake from sleep all the time!!


Take your time to draw everything, don't be hasty. Handdrawn art always takes time. :)
:iconsandergfx:
youre welcome! :]

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